http://www.smogon.com/dp/articles/baton_pass_chains
It should probably be 'What makes Gliscor a successful Baton Passer' or 'What gives Gliscor the potential to be even more of a success'. You could say 'What makes Gliscor's job successful usually', but I'm sure the above just doesn't work.
http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/machamp
You only need to state how carefully they must be played once. Remove the 'they also must be played very carefully'.Baton Pass teams must be carefully played if they're to work properly; they also must be played very carefully.
'for' it and its team to use.it has just the right amount of HP to set up a 101 HP Substitute it and its team to use once Baton Passed.
What makes Gliscor's job even more of a success is the fact that it has access to the move Taunt and the ability Hyper Cutter,What makes Gliscor’s job even more of a success is because it has access to the move Taunt and the ability Hyper Cutter,
It should probably be 'What makes Gliscor a successful Baton Passer' or 'What gives Gliscor the potential to be even more of a success'. You could say 'What makes Gliscor's job successful usually', but I'm sure the above just doesn't work.
http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/machamp
I have no idea what any of this is referring to but I'm sure 'pick' should be 'take your pick from', and then I have no idea what goes after thatScizor also makes a great partner in this scenario as it can pick of Choice + Trick Rotom-As thanks to Pursuit.