(Archive) Small Objective Changes Thread

[Giulls]

http://www.smogon.com/dp/items/persim_berry

In the Overview section, "Salamence and Garchomp can use the Persim Berry to stop the confusion caused by Outage". 'Outage' should say 'Outrage'.

 

[Giulls]

By the way, if to somehow make up for the glaring, terrible error I just committed, my eyes caught a single quotation mark at the end of my above post, unpaired with anything, useless. So I edited my post and then read the DO NOT EDIT POST message. Sorry!

 

[macle]

I fixed it.

 

[Zacchaeus]

sorry, but since this is a humour article, we sort of want to leave the funny bits in it...

Okay, I just didn't realize that it was meant to switch from his grandmother to his mother, my bad. If only I knew that beforehand so I didn't have to waste so much time

 

[iDunno]

http://www.smogon.com/dp/items/rindo_berry

When it mention's swamperts niche use of rindo berry, it says it can strike back with Magic Coat when it is supposed to say Mirror Coat.

 

[dr00]

http://www.smogon.com/dp/items/rindo_berry

When it mention's swamperts niche use of rindo berry, it says it can strike back with Magic Coat when it is supposed to say Mirror Coat.

it also says that swampert can phaze out something with hidden power ice; shouldn't this be grass?

 

[iss]

OK, I wrote Drifloon and the LC section of Clamperl and I found some mistakes:

http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/drifloon

On the Lead v1 set, the EVs should be 116 Atk / 196 SpA / 196 Spe. I must have left out the Special Attack EVs by accident.

http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/clamperl

The Counters section is seriously fucked up. The formatting has gone crazy.

 

[whistle]

fixed both. clamperl was missing an html tag and drifloon's evs were labeled as "SAtk" instead of "SpA" so the site didn't recognize them.

 

[Zacchaeus]

There's nowhere else to post this, but somebody has to go in the forum rules and some of the subforum rules and change every "infraction" to "warning", thanks to the "Small Forum Change"

 

[Zacchaeus]

Oh yeah no editing here. Links: Rules, Congregation of the Masses, Internet Renaissance, Firebot Development Lab, Articles and Analyses, Concision, CAP, Stark Mountain, Ubers, Tournaments, RMT,

And I forgot the FAQ: FAQ

 

[VKCA]

While on the topic of the faq, there should probably be some mention of the world cup trophy, and the users who have it (similar to the spl trophy paragraph)

 

[jumpluff]

FAQs cannot be updated by anyone but the admins, but thanks for the reminder. I'll bring it up.

 

[Sir Azelf]

http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/tentacruel#Swords_Dance

The damage calculations are wrong against Gyarados. It says "+1" Vs Gyarados when it should be +2, Tentacruel has Clear Body so Intimidate is never a factor.

• +2 Life Orb Poison Jab vs 252 HP / 252 Def Impish Gyarados: 53.4% - 62.8%
• +2 Life Orb Poison Jab vs 156 HP / 96 Def Gyarados: 72.4% - 85.4%

That is what it SHOULD be.

 

[Nexus]

http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/kangaskhan

Team Options:

For the physical attacker set, make sure to remove Rock- and Steel-types beforehand so they don't slow down Kangaskhan's momentum.

should be Physical Attacker since it's referring to a set.

http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/mismagius

In the Nasty Plot Set:

In OU, an EV spread of 108 HP / 148 SpA / 252 Spe with a Timid nature is recommended; the extra HP EVs ensure that neither Blissey's elemental attacks, nor Cresselia's +1 Psychic will not break the Substitute.

This sounds awkward. I think the "not" in between will and break should be removed.

 

[supermarth64]

http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/tentacruel#Swords_Dance

The damage calculations are wrong against Gyarados. It says "+1" Vs Gyarados when it should be +2, Tentacruel has Clear Body so Intimidate is never a factor.

• +2 Life Orb Poison Jab vs 252 HP / 252 Def Impish Gyarados: 53.4% - 62.8%
• +2 Life Orb Poison Jab vs 156 HP / 96 Def Gyarados: 72.4% - 85.4%

That is what it SHOULD be.

My bad, I forgot Tentacruel had Clear Body and nagged R_D to change it, but the +2 calcs were wrong at the beginning anyway. Changed.

 

[ForTheSwarm]

http://www.smogon.com/dp/items/chesto_berry

Emdash not coded properly. "Pokemon&emdash;specifically sweepers&emdash;"

 

[jumpluff]

Fixed. Thank you for the alert!

 

[Zacchaeus]

http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/dragonite/moves

Dragonite is missing many Pt/HG/SS move tutor moves, including: Dive, Fury Cutter, Ice Punch, Icy Wind, Mud-Slap, Snore, and Swift

 

[jumpluff]

http://www.smogon.com/forums/showthread.php?t=38386

 

[Mike Legend]

http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/mamoswine

in team options it mentions this

Dragonite generally has no fear of Skarmory thanks to Fire Blast, allowing it to even counter Skarmory thanks to Intimidate.

obviously a mistake from when mence references were changed.

 

[cosmicexplorer]

http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/grumpig

In Grumpig's "Counters" section, Honchkrow is mentioned in the first paragraph, the one that starts with, "In UU," This implies that Honchkrow is UU, when it is now BL.

 

[Mercury]

http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/absol


This is the first sentence of the Absol analysis:

Absol's amazing base 130 Attack stat coupled with Swords Dance and the strongest priority move in the game makes make it a devastating sweeper against those who aren't prepared.

Incorrect subject-verb agreement.

 

[Flora]

http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/ludicolo

At Team Options, first and fourth paragraph, UU, there are odd spacing (possibly by me). The first one's at "obtainwithoutHydroPump" while the second one is at "coveringLudicolo's Bug-". There's more in the first paragraph: "chip damage isuseful overallin".

There's another one at the Overview, second paragraph for UU. "Surf inthe rain".

Again, for UU special, after the calcs, "increased Base Powerchanges 2HKOes"

 

[jc104]

At Team Options, first and fourth paragraph, UU, there are odd spacing (possibly by me). The first one's at at "obtainwithoutHydroPump" while the second one is at "coveringLudicolo's Bug-". There's more in the first paragraph: "chip damage isuseful overallin".

There's another one at the Overview, second paragraph for UU. "Surf inthe rain".

Again, for UU special, after the calcs, "increased Base Powerchanges 2HKOes"

Fixed all of the errors mentioned above.

 

[Aura Guardian]

http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/metagross

Either set "Trick + Iron Ball" needs to have the "Ability" category removed or all the others need it added. I think removed is best since Metagross only has the one ability.