Gather around the bonfire, and I shall tell you a tale

[Birkal]

Haha awesome job. Loved the story! Go Chlorophyll Sweepers!

 

[TM13IceBeam]

The Conkeldurr-Gallade paragraph made me laugh.

Really. Gallade and Scrafty completely outclass Conk at Bulk Up.

 

[Cherub Agent]

The Conkeldurr-Gallade paragraph made me laugh.

Really. Gallade and Scrafty completely outclass Conk at Bulk Up.

Really? I don't think they outclass Conkelderp, they're simply different. Conkelderp has Mach Punch, which is the reason he's used so much.

 

[Yoshiken]

Absolutely amazing read. Damn funny, well written and an interesting Sun team. Luvdisc~

 

[Charro]

Awesome warstory, Gallade is one of my favorite mons, and I really want to make a team around him now (is on my "to test" list)
Keep it going Alpha <3

 

[nintes]

Awesome, awesome warstory. I can't believe no-one noticed/commented on your excellent My Chemical Romance interweaving.

10/10 and a disc

 

[Shock_wave]

One of the best warstories I've read in a long time. Kudos, sir.

And a luvdisc, too.

 

[Stratos]

Great story

 

[Rackham]

Haha, cool (war)story bro, have a luvdisc =D

 

[hamlunches]

you absolute saint, great warstory 10/10

 

[Steamroll]

This
was
awesome
10/10 + luvdisc

 

[Phadunk]

first warstory in a while that i read through completely. good stuff.

 

[Addiethunder]

Amazing Warstory. Loved the Conkeldurr and Gallade 'Old Spice' moment.

Have a Luvdisc for this awesome Warstory!

 

[GreenWater10]

This is probably one of my favorite warstories I have read this week. Good job on it. I give it a 10/10.

 

[Benny in a Jet]

This was hilarious. I don't know why, but for some reason sun teams are more fun to read about. Luvdisc'd, and I'm gonna go buy some Old Spice.

Also...

Props:
-Starmie for making sure that Ferrothorn would never get the chance to do anything outside of one move the whole game and for getting rid of hazards.
-Ninetales for assisting in killing Latios and Tyranitar
-My opponent for not using the standard set for specially defensive mixed tyranitar
-Modest LO Hydreigon in general

Wha?!? No Justice Gallade?! T-T

 

[bearsfan092]

I stopped reading at the Old Spice Gallade thing because I loved it.

 

[Juice!]

The Old Spice reference was fucking gold. This was really well written, I like your writing style as reading your story felt like one of my friends was telling it in conversation. You made a few small mistakes, but you caught them yourself, which is the important part. Great format, pretty decent battle, fun to read. Overall, very well done. =)
9/10, please write more. Cheers!

 

[AuraSphere]

What they said. I liked the Gallade rant, too. Luvdisc'd.

 

[Pika25]

9.7 out of 10 and a Luvdisc. THIS is what War Stories should look like. I'm assuming the EV's on the Gallade were just 4/max/max...

 

[Brumrha]

You've got some of the best commentary that I've ever heard anywhere. I especially liked the part in which you made a comparison of your Gallade & the standard Conkeldurr. Also, I thought that your referrences to MW2 & Black Ops were very witty.

The battle itself is great, but sometimes, the commentary is what makes a warstory stand out, & yours did.

 

[Vratix]

A lot of fun to read. Very good commentary.
Fairly good battle, not amazing but still rather good.
79/100

C+

 

[Ashenlock]

About the same as Vratix. Pretty good commentary, decent battle. 8/10-ish

 

[Zachilles]

One of the most entertaining warstories I've read in a while. 9/10 and a Luvdisc.

 

[callforjudgement]

Wow, I liked this, especially the useless trivia. (And it's interesting seeing what a metagame I don't play is like. I suppose that happens a lot with warstories nowadays, given that I don't play 5th gen OU...)

 

[soul_survivor]

amazing warstory, n gallade rant (=.