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(Archive) Small Objective Changes Thread
- Thread starter eric the espeon
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http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/spinda
For the Enduring Flailer set, it says "Faint Attack or Sucker Punch that them there Ghosts."
For the Enduring Flailer set, it says "Faint Attack or Sucker Punch that them there Ghosts."
That's part of the joke ;)
Yes, Fatecrashers is right, this (http://www.smogon.com/forums/showpost.php?p=2992271&postcount=27) is an intentional error in the spirit of the joke analysis and won't be changed. Thanks for pointing it out, though.
The Darkrai analysis page (http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/darkrai):
This sentence is rather disjointed. How can it be much easier to check in one sentence and then have only one counter in the other? Unless - and perhaps even if - the analysis writer means to play on the difference between "check" and "counter" (which is by no means clear - what's more, even the word "counter" is in inverted commas ...), this sentence needs to be checked.
Also this part is awkward:
Two problems:
1. The article appears to be using "check" and "counter" rather interchangeably. Unless I'm missing something, Ho-oh is no true counter to Darkrai because it can die to its own Brave Bird after OHKO'ing Darkrai ...
2. Bolded part is really clunky. Why not just use something like "after sleep clause is active"?
This sentence is rather disjointed. How can it be much easier to check in one sentence and then have only one counter in the other? Unless - and perhaps even if - the analysis writer means to play on the difference between "check" and "counter" (which is by no means clear - what's more, even the word "counter" is in inverted commas ...), this sentence needs to be checked.
Also this part is awkward:
Two problems:
1. The article appears to be using "check" and "counter" rather interchangeably. Unless I'm missing something, Ho-oh is no true counter to Darkrai because it can die to its own Brave Bird after OHKO'ing Darkrai ...
2. Bolded part is really clunky. Why not just use something like "after sleep clause is active"?
http://www.smogon.com/dp/articles/lc_threatlist
The two links up at top are broken. Well not really in the sense that they're broken--they should have the #stuffHere thing, imo.
The two links up at top are broken. Well not really in the sense that they're broken--they should have the #stuffHere thing, imo.
http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/electabuzz
Just saying, there are 252 EVs missing =O. They are supposed to be in SpA with accordance with this thread: http://www.smogon.com/forums/showthread.php?t=59623. I'm aware I can fix this myself, but I don't know how to do it.
Just saying, there are 252 EVs missing =O. They are supposed to be in SpA with accordance with this thread: http://www.smogon.com/forums/showthread.php?t=59623. I'm aware I can fix this myself, but I don't know how to do it.
http://www.smogon.com/dp/moves/close_combat
Superpower is almost identical, but Attack drops after use instead of
Special Defense.
http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/staraptor#Life_Orb
Starraptor SubRoost set, last sentence
Staraptor can utilize Substitute to dodge those irritating status which render Staraptor's effectiveness useless.
-> (effectivly) render Starraptor useless.
Superpower is almost identical, but Attack drops after use instead of
Special Defense.
http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/staraptor#Life_Orb
Starraptor SubRoost set, last sentence
Staraptor can utilize Substitute to dodge those irritating status which render Staraptor's effectiveness useless.
-> (effectivly) render Starraptor useless.
The Sceptile analysis page - http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/sceptile
In the first case, isn't it a 100% chance of OHKO with Stealth Rock?
In the second, Clefable doesn't suffer from Stealth Rock thanks to Magic Guard. I haven't performed calcs, but I'm really sceptical that Sceptile can 2HKO Clefable, especially through Leftovers and -2 SpA on the second hit.
In the third, it's a bit strange that while every other set has a "guaranteed OHKO" or "2HKO with Stealth Rock" line, this one doesn't, because it's a guaranteed 2HKO.
In the first case, isn't it a 100% chance of OHKO with Stealth Rock?
In the second, Clefable doesn't suffer from Stealth Rock thanks to Magic Guard. I haven't performed calcs, but I'm really sceptical that Sceptile can 2HKO Clefable, especially through Leftovers and -2 SpA on the second hit.
In the third, it's a bit strange that while every other set has a "guaranteed OHKO" or "2HKO with Stealth Rock" line, this one doesn't, because it's a guaranteed 2HKO.
The Ambipom analysis page - http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/ambipom
The previous set (which was NP + attack, if I remember right) was taken down ...
The previous set (which was NP + attack, if I remember right) was taken down ...
Fixed
Fixed also.
fixed both.
this has already been fixed.
Changed to remove Honchkrow's mention.
this has been fixed already
it really makes no difference since metagross only has one ability anyway
not an error, the second case has been fixed.
that error was fixed but I then removed a scond mention of this imaginary CB set.
this has been fixed
this has been fixed already
fixed already
this has already been fixed.
http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/houndoom
at lead set ability is linked to http://www.smogon.com/dp/abilities/early_bird__flash_fire instead linking to both abilities separately.
Also same thing here: http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/abra with choice set.
at lead set ability is linked to http://www.smogon.com/dp/abilities/early_bird__flash_fire instead linking to both abilities separately.
Also same thing here: http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/abra with choice set.
In the Special Life Orb analysis of Flygon, a sentence reads, "For example, come in on a Pokemon such as Starmie (who outspeeds Flygon) and threaten an KO with U-turn ThunderPunch. It should read, "For example, come in on a Pokemon such as Starmie (who outspeeds Flygon) and threaten a KO with U-turn or ThunderPunch."
Also, in the Trick Iron Ball set for Metagross, a sentence reads, "With poor prediction, this set will face difficulty against Heatran, while Earthquake can keep it at bay, it can easily come in on a Meteor Mash and proceed to pick off Metagross." It should be separated into two sentences: "With poor prediction, this set will face difficulty against Heatran. While Earthquake can keep it at bay, it can easily come in on a Meteor Mash and proceed to pick off Metagross."
Also, in the Trick Iron Ball set for Metagross, a sentence reads, "With poor prediction, this set will face difficulty against Heatran, while Earthquake can keep it at bay, it can easily come in on a Meteor Mash and proceed to pick off Metagross." It should be separated into two sentences: "With poor prediction, this set will face difficulty against Heatran. While Earthquake can keep it at bay, it can easily come in on a Meteor Mash and proceed to pick off Metagross."
www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/shedinja
Under the Baton Pass set, where the author describes the use of Heal Block, he says "and other healing more". Based on the context, this should be "move".
Under the Baton Pass set, where the author describes the use of Heal Block, he says "and other healing more". Based on the context, this should be "move".
Alright guys, since I've been bored recently, I've taken up the task of going through every D/P/P/HG/SS analysis for NU and up Pokemon. I've been searching for spelling and context errors, along with simple grammatical errors. So far, for every Pokemon whose name begins with A (Abomasnow to Azumarill), I found 17 typos. Here they are:
http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/abomasnow
--In the Choice Specs set analysis, second paragraph, it says "Claydol also the advantage...". Add "has", so that it now reads "Claydol also has the advantage..."
--In the CB Set, first paragraph, right after the first sentence, all those moves are sentence fragments. It should read: "You have your physical moves: Ice Shard blah blah blah, Wood Hammer blah blah blah, Earthquake to provide great coverage, and Focus Punch for lack of a better move." The blah's are there because the original fragment makes sense in the new form and I don't feel like Wii-typing them out.
http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/absol
--In Team Options, third line of the last paragraph, it says "includea" instead of "include a"
--In Counters, first paragraph near the bottom, it says ";,". The ; should be deleted.
http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/aerodactyl
--In Optional Changes, Last Paragraph, an EV spread says "108 HP/252 Atk/150 Speshould". There needs to be a space between Spe and should.
http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/alakazam
--In Team Options, first paragraph, it says "they helps Alakazam 2HKO Spiritomb". "Helps" is improper and "help" is the correct form.
--In Counters, first paragraph, it says "thanks to its Psychic- and Fighting-type immunity". "Immunity" should be plural.
http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/altaria
--In the Defensive Dancer set, second paragraph, it says "not as detrimental to Altaria's sweeping chances from Outrage's confusion". "From" should be replaced with "as".
http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/ampharos
--The grammatically incorrect "Ampharos's" is used in certain places through the article. IIRC, it is only used incorrectly in the Overview and the first set, but it may be elsewhere. It should be replaced with "Ampharos'".
http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/arcanine
--In the Physical Life Orb set, third paragraph, it says "It lets Arcanine to more effectively finish off". The "to" needs to be omitted.
--In the Physically Defensive set, bottom paragraph, it says "HP and Defense EV's will maximizing". Maximizing should change to "maximize".
--In Other Options, near the middle, it says "coverage against some other more general foe". I'm not too sure if this is correct, but shouldn't "foe" be plural?
http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/ariados
--In the CB Set, first paragraph, it says "Ariados's" Like for Ampharos, Ariados' is proper. I think this is the only time it appears.
http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/armaldo
--In Team Options, second paragraph, it says "are often the first Pokémon wo spring to mind". "Wo" should be "who".
--In Other Options, it says "Rock Slide is on offer if you want more accuracy". "On" should be "one".
http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/azelf
--In the Dual Screens set, it says "get a sweeper in scott free". Now, according to Google, "scott free" is supposedly an alternate spelling, maybe British, I don't know, but I don't think that it sounds as concise as scot-free. Either way, it will suffice.
--In the Nasty Plot set, fourth paragraph, it says "threaten an OHKO". "An" should be "a".
And that is all I found for Abomasnow-Azumarill in the way of glaring errors. Sorry if this isn't formatted correctly or if there is a typo somewhere in this post (Irony is cruel like that), but I am Wii-typing all this so it's a bit more difficult to stop typos. Anyway, I'll probably be finished with the letter B in a few days. Thanks for fixing these up.
http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/abomasnow
--In the Choice Specs set analysis, second paragraph, it says "Claydol also the advantage...". Add "has", so that it now reads "Claydol also has the advantage..."
--In the CB Set, first paragraph, right after the first sentence, all those moves are sentence fragments. It should read: "You have your physical moves: Ice Shard blah blah blah, Wood Hammer blah blah blah, Earthquake to provide great coverage, and Focus Punch for lack of a better move." The blah's are there because the original fragment makes sense in the new form and I don't feel like Wii-typing them out.
http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/absol
--In Team Options, third line of the last paragraph, it says "includea" instead of "include a"
--In Counters, first paragraph near the bottom, it says ";,". The ; should be deleted.
http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/aerodactyl
--In Optional Changes, Last Paragraph, an EV spread says "108 HP/252 Atk/150 Speshould". There needs to be a space between Spe and should.
http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/alakazam
--In Team Options, first paragraph, it says "they helps Alakazam 2HKO Spiritomb". "Helps" is improper and "help" is the correct form.
--In Counters, first paragraph, it says "thanks to its Psychic- and Fighting-type immunity". "Immunity" should be plural.
http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/altaria
--In the Defensive Dancer set, second paragraph, it says "not as detrimental to Altaria's sweeping chances from Outrage's confusion". "From" should be replaced with "as".
http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/ampharos
--The grammatically incorrect "Ampharos's" is used in certain places through the article. IIRC, it is only used incorrectly in the Overview and the first set, but it may be elsewhere. It should be replaced with "Ampharos'".
http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/arcanine
--In the Physical Life Orb set, third paragraph, it says "It lets Arcanine to more effectively finish off". The "to" needs to be omitted.
--In the Physically Defensive set, bottom paragraph, it says "HP and Defense EV's will maximizing". Maximizing should change to "maximize".
--In Other Options, near the middle, it says "coverage against some other more general foe". I'm not too sure if this is correct, but shouldn't "foe" be plural?
http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/ariados
--In the CB Set, first paragraph, it says "Ariados's" Like for Ampharos, Ariados' is proper. I think this is the only time it appears.
http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/armaldo
--In Team Options, second paragraph, it says "are often the first Pokémon wo spring to mind". "Wo" should be "who".
--In Other Options, it says "Rock Slide is on offer if you want more accuracy". "On" should be "one".
http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/azelf
--In the Dual Screens set, it says "get a sweeper in scott free". Now, according to Google, "scott free" is supposedly an alternate spelling, maybe British, I don't know, but I don't think that it sounds as concise as scot-free. Either way, it will suffice.
--In the Nasty Plot set, fourth paragraph, it says "threaten an OHKO". "An" should be "a".
And that is all I found for Abomasnow-Azumarill in the way of glaring errors. Sorry if this isn't formatted correctly or if there is a typo somewhere in this post (Irony is cruel like that), but I am Wii-typing all this so it's a bit more difficult to stop typos. Anyway, I'll probably be finished with the letter B in a few days. Thanks for fixing these up.
I have fixed this. Sets shouldn't list both abilities if both are viable.
I have fixed this.
I fixed this.
I finished with Bastiodon - Butterfree, a total of 10 typos and incorrect statements.
http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/bastiodon
--In the first sentence of the Offensive Metal Burst set, it incorrectly states that only Bastiodon and Aggron can learn Metal Burst. Dialga can as well. This should be fixed by saying that Aggron and Bastiodon are the only non-Uber Pokemon to learn Metal Burst.
--In the second paragraph of the same set, it says "Curse and Metal Burst is a fabulous combination". This is fixed by either saying "Curse + Metal Burst is a fabulous combination", or by saying "Curse and Metal Burst are a fabulous combination."
--In the Opinion section, near the bottom, it says "giving you a 4x Ground and Fighting weakness". This should be "giving you 4x Ground- and Fighting-type weaknesses."
http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/beedrill
--In the Agility set, near the bottom, it says "will demolish Roc-k and Steel-types." This should say "will demolish Rock- and Steel-types."
http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/bibarel
--In the Tauntarel set, last sentence, it says "guarantee an OHKO." This should be "guarantee a OHKO."
http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/blaziken
--In Other Options, first sentence, it says "As Blaziken has viable sets". All Pokemon have viable sets, and Blaziken has a ton, so I think the author meant "As Blaziken has many viable sets".
http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/blissey
--In the OU Counters list, for Machamp, it says "Machamp can easily switch into any Blissey set with ease." "Easily" and "with ease" are redundant, so just pick one and remove the other. I personally like "with ease" better.
http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/breloom
--In the last paragraph of the Choice Scarf set, it says "neutralising threats". Now, neutralising may be the British spelling, and is technically correct, but the use of American spellings throughout the rest of the article makes this sound awkward.
http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/bronzong
--In the Trick Room set (not Off. Trick Room), second sentence, the "B" in Gyro "B"all needs capitalized.
--In Team Options, third paragraph, it says "who causes Bronzong problemsas all it can do". There needs to be a space between "problems" and "as".
That's it for the B's that I saw.
http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/bastiodon
--In the first sentence of the Offensive Metal Burst set, it incorrectly states that only Bastiodon and Aggron can learn Metal Burst. Dialga can as well. This should be fixed by saying that Aggron and Bastiodon are the only non-Uber Pokemon to learn Metal Burst.
--In the second paragraph of the same set, it says "Curse and Metal Burst is a fabulous combination". This is fixed by either saying "Curse + Metal Burst is a fabulous combination", or by saying "Curse and Metal Burst are a fabulous combination."
--In the Opinion section, near the bottom, it says "giving you a 4x Ground and Fighting weakness". This should be "giving you 4x Ground- and Fighting-type weaknesses."
http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/beedrill
--In the Agility set, near the bottom, it says "will demolish Roc-k and Steel-types." This should say "will demolish Rock- and Steel-types."
http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/bibarel
--In the Tauntarel set, last sentence, it says "guarantee an OHKO." This should be "guarantee a OHKO."
http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/blaziken
--In Other Options, first sentence, it says "As Blaziken has viable sets". All Pokemon have viable sets, and Blaziken has a ton, so I think the author meant "As Blaziken has many viable sets".
http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/blissey
--In the OU Counters list, for Machamp, it says "Machamp can easily switch into any Blissey set with ease." "Easily" and "with ease" are redundant, so just pick one and remove the other. I personally like "with ease" better.
http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/breloom
--In the last paragraph of the Choice Scarf set, it says "neutralising threats". Now, neutralising may be the British spelling, and is technically correct, but the use of American spellings throughout the rest of the article makes this sound awkward.
http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/bronzong
--In the Trick Room set (not Off. Trick Room), second sentence, the "B" in Gyro "B"all needs capitalized.
--In Team Options, third paragraph, it says "who causes Bronzong problemsas all it can do". There needs to be a space between "problems" and "as".
That's it for the B's that I saw.
http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/mesprit
The UU team options for Mesprit mentions Umbreon, who is now OU.
The UU team options for Mesprit mentions Umbreon, who is now OU.
The Mew analysis page, additional comments on the first set.
http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/mew
Extra word.
http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/mew
Extra word.
I have all the stuff I found from Cacturne - Crobat, totaling 23 corrections.
http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/cacturne
--In the Overview, near the bottom, it says "cost Cacturne's life". This should be "cost Cacturne its life".
http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/celebi
--In the Baton Pass set, third paragraph, it says "all of Celebi's weaknesses bar Flying (in Lucario's case) and Fire." Lucario's and Metagross' Fire weaknesses were already discussed earlier in that particular sentence, so chopping off the "and Fire" at the end prevents redundancy.
http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/charizard
--In the MixZard set, fourth paragraph, it says "While Air Slash have few key benefits,". I believe the author meant "While Air Slash does have a few key benefits,".
--In the Choice Specs set, fourth paragraph, it says "This set does also appreciate Rapid Spin". This is awkward, and a better wording would be "This set also appreciates Rapid Spin".
http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/clamperl
--In the UU Overview, it says "Clamperl's Special Attack rises to an unbelievable 540". It doesn't say how though, so adding "With DeepSeaTooth," to the beginning clarifies it.
--In the LC ResTalk section, last sentence of the third paragraph, it says "never set up or arespun away". There needs to be a space in between "are" and "spun".
http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/claydol
--In the Calm Mind set, first paragraph, it says "Thanks to its goodbulk". There isn't a space in between "good" and "bulk".
http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/clefable
--In the Toxic Orb Abuse set, last sentence of the third paragraph, it says "set up more than two layer of Spikes". "Layer" needs pluralized.
--In the Belly-Edge set, last sentence, it says "Clefable can Softboiled". It should say "Clefable can use Softboiled".
--In Team Options, near the bottom, it says "Clefable's counters falls". "Falls" should be "fall".
http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/corsola
--In the first set, first paragraph, it says "no other Water Pokemon, besides Starmie, has: the ability, Natural Cure". No comma needs to be between "the ability" and "Natural Cure".
http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/crawdaunt
--In the DD set, second paragraph, it says "maximum damage output, the Speed EV's". It should say "maximum damage output, and the Speed EV's".
--In the same set and same paragraph, it says "outpace key threats such as, Mismagius, Scyther,". The comma before Mismagius is not necessary. This same mistake occurs frequently throughout this article.
--In the same set, third paragraph, it says "such as, Blaziken" Same mistake as above.
--In the Choice Band set, it says "only two Pokemon with the ability Intimidate in UU (Masquerain and Granbull)". This is false, but I'm not sure how exactly to fix this. On one hand, both those Pokemon are NU, so perhaps NU was meant by the author. However, the set itself is analyzed in the UU metagame, and no mention of NU is made at all. I'll leave this to the discretion of whoever fixes this mistake.
--In the Mixed Sweeper set, it says "Night Slash and Shadow Claw are excellent opportunities that could be ruined by a critical hit". This makes absolutely no sense, and I think it should instead say "Night Slash and Shadow Claw can ruin you with a critical hit".
To be honest, I really don't like the way this whole article is put together. I believe it is in need of a rewrite.
http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/cresselia
--In the Uber overview, near rhe bottom, it says "Lugia often out shadows Cresselia". This should say "Lugia often overshadows Cresselia".
--In the last sentence of the OU Dual Screen set, it mentions Salamence, who is now banned from OU. This needs fixed.
--In the Uber Dual Screens set, last paragraph, it says "if Reflect up". This should be "if Reflect is up".
http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/crobat
--In the Standard Bat set, fifth paragraph, it says "but shares an Electric-types weakness". "Types" shouldn't be plural.
--In the Life Orb set, first paragraph, it says "while also hitting Tyranitar (blah) super effective" That should be "super effectively".
--In Team Options, first paragraph, it says "Tentacruel and Forretress, both can also utilize". It should say "Tentacruel and Forretress, and both can utilize".
--In Team Options, second paragraph, it says "Heatran itself, can counter" The comma isn't necessary.
Those are all the typos I saw in all Pokemon starting with C.
http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/cacturne
--In the Overview, near the bottom, it says "cost Cacturne's life". This should be "cost Cacturne its life".
http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/celebi
--In the Baton Pass set, third paragraph, it says "all of Celebi's weaknesses bar Flying (in Lucario's case) and Fire." Lucario's and Metagross' Fire weaknesses were already discussed earlier in that particular sentence, so chopping off the "and Fire" at the end prevents redundancy.
http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/charizard
--In the MixZard set, fourth paragraph, it says "While Air Slash have few key benefits,". I believe the author meant "While Air Slash does have a few key benefits,".
--In the Choice Specs set, fourth paragraph, it says "This set does also appreciate Rapid Spin". This is awkward, and a better wording would be "This set also appreciates Rapid Spin".
http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/clamperl
--In the UU Overview, it says "Clamperl's Special Attack rises to an unbelievable 540". It doesn't say how though, so adding "With DeepSeaTooth," to the beginning clarifies it.
--In the LC ResTalk section, last sentence of the third paragraph, it says "never set up or arespun away". There needs to be a space in between "are" and "spun".
http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/claydol
--In the Calm Mind set, first paragraph, it says "Thanks to its goodbulk". There isn't a space in between "good" and "bulk".
http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/clefable
--In the Toxic Orb Abuse set, last sentence of the third paragraph, it says "set up more than two layer of Spikes". "Layer" needs pluralized.
--In the Belly-Edge set, last sentence, it says "Clefable can Softboiled". It should say "Clefable can use Softboiled".
--In Team Options, near the bottom, it says "Clefable's counters falls". "Falls" should be "fall".
http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/corsola
--In the first set, first paragraph, it says "no other Water Pokemon, besides Starmie, has: the ability, Natural Cure". No comma needs to be between "the ability" and "Natural Cure".
http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/crawdaunt
--In the DD set, second paragraph, it says "maximum damage output, the Speed EV's". It should say "maximum damage output, and the Speed EV's".
--In the same set and same paragraph, it says "outpace key threats such as, Mismagius, Scyther,". The comma before Mismagius is not necessary. This same mistake occurs frequently throughout this article.
--In the same set, third paragraph, it says "such as, Blaziken" Same mistake as above.
--In the Choice Band set, it says "only two Pokemon with the ability Intimidate in UU (Masquerain and Granbull)". This is false, but I'm not sure how exactly to fix this. On one hand, both those Pokemon are NU, so perhaps NU was meant by the author. However, the set itself is analyzed in the UU metagame, and no mention of NU is made at all. I'll leave this to the discretion of whoever fixes this mistake.
--In the Mixed Sweeper set, it says "Night Slash and Shadow Claw are excellent opportunities that could be ruined by a critical hit". This makes absolutely no sense, and I think it should instead say "Night Slash and Shadow Claw can ruin you with a critical hit".
To be honest, I really don't like the way this whole article is put together. I believe it is in need of a rewrite.
http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/cresselia
--In the Uber overview, near rhe bottom, it says "Lugia often out shadows Cresselia". This should say "Lugia often overshadows Cresselia".
--In the last sentence of the OU Dual Screen set, it mentions Salamence, who is now banned from OU. This needs fixed.
--In the Uber Dual Screens set, last paragraph, it says "if Reflect up". This should be "if Reflect is up".
http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/crobat
--In the Standard Bat set, fifth paragraph, it says "but shares an Electric-types weakness". "Types" shouldn't be plural.
--In the Life Orb set, first paragraph, it says "while also hitting Tyranitar (blah) super effective" That should be "super effectively".
--In Team Options, first paragraph, it says "Tentacruel and Forretress, both can also utilize". It should say "Tentacruel and Forretress, and both can utilize".
--In Team Options, second paragraph, it says "Heatran itself, can counter" The comma isn't necessary.
Those are all the typos I saw in all Pokemon starting with C.